Friday, 17 March 2017

The Black Hat

2 comments:

  1. Hi Billy I am ronak from Park estate School and I really loved your story but there wasn't that much punctuation so next time add more punctuation. kind re guards from Ronak :)

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  2. Hi Billy!

    My name is Ellee and I will be blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning journey!

    That is one spooky story! I hope that Master Jeff finds some friend in the end! I think it is very impressive the way you have presented your story too. I am looking forward to reading some other stories you might write over the summer.

    If you want to check out the Summer Learning Journey website you can follow this link: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/

    Here is also a link to the weekly activities:
    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Remember each activity is worth points so make sure once you’ve finished an activity post it up on your blog so we can add it to your total!

    Hopefully I'll see you blogging over the summer soon!

    Ellee :)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.